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Editing; Draft #5
Date : Saturday, August 1, 2009
“Vijay, I’m celebrating my birthday this weekend at my place! Want to join in the fun?” Vijay recalled from memory.

“Sure! Why not? ” Vijay replied.

Vijay sure remembered the fun times he had with Narada many years ago. They had been very close buddies since their elementary school years. Many years passed and their friendship remained. They grew older and were preparing for their University admission examinations. Staying near each other’s families then brought their bond even closer and stronger.

Not until the government of Sri Lanka, introduced new university admissions criteria, (where the Tamils in the country have to obtain a better score in their examination results than the Sinhalese to get into a university) that affected their friendship.

As the date of the university admission examinations drew nearer, Vijay became nervous and hoped that Narada could comfort and encourage him. However, Narada was not aware and continued with his own examination preparation. During that whole period, Vijay felt terrible as the stress was overwhelming, due to the fact that he had to obtain a much better score that he could hardly attain. Putting his emotions and anxieties aside, he tried his very best to prepare for the examinations.

On the day of examination, Vijay kept quiet and had not spoken a word. He was worried if he could perform well enough. Seeing the state that Vijay was in, Narada apologised to him for not being there for him when he needed him the most. Vijay then assured Narada that he will make it. After hearing what Narada told him, Vijay walked into the examination hall with confidence.

After the results of the examinations were released, Vijay became disappointed as he had not done well. On the other hand, Narada did well and managed to get into a university.

“Vijay! I managed to get into a university! Isn’t that great?” Narada exclaimed with shouts of joy, “Yes! I’ve finally achieved it!”

“Yes… it is certainly great… but I... I did not manage to…” Before completing his sentence, tears of sadness flowed down Vijay’s cheeks.

Narada placed his arms on Vijay’s shoulders and encouraged him in a gentle tone, “You don’t have to get upset with this, there’s always a second chance. You can do it again!”

“Please! Just leave me alone…” Vijay shook Narada’s arms off his shoulders and walked away.

Months passed, Vijay distanced himself away from Narada, making their relationship worse. The frustration that built up in Vijay's heart drove him to make the decision to join the Tamil United Liberation Front; demanding the government to withdraw the new university admission criteria, together with other issues of the Tamils. After over 20 years of waiting for the Sri Lanka government to take actions, nothing had been done. By then, the Liberation Tigers of Tamil Elam was formed and Vijay joined them in protest with violence to meet with the Tamils’ demands. His whole family moved to another town in Sri Lanka, away from Narada’s family.

The fateful day arrived, when Vijay was assigned to plant a bomb in the town where Narada lives in. The whole plan succeeded in killing a number of Sinhalese. Days later, by chance, Vijay received news that Narada's body was found on the streets…

After all these years being haunted by these dreadful memories, the devastated Vijay told himself, “In my life, this is my greatest mistake that I have made. I had allowed my emotions to take control over me in exchange for my friend’s life.” Afterwards, he took up his pistol and a loud shot was heard.

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Conclusion; Draft #4
Date : Sunday, July 26, 2009
“Vijay! I’m celebrating my birthday this weekend in my house! Want to join in the fun?”

“Sure! Why not?”

Vijay sure remembered the fun times he had with Narada many years ago. They have been very close buddies since elementary school. Many years passed, their bond did not change; they grew older and were preparing for the University admission. Staying together with each other’s family brought their bond even closer and stronger. Not until the government of Sri Lanka, introduced new university admission criteria; where the Tamils in the country have to obtain a better score in their examinations than the Sinhalese to get into a university.

As the date of the university admission examinations drew nearer, Vijay became nervous and hoped that Narada could comfort and encourage him. However, Narada did not give him much concern and continued with his examination preparation. During the whole preparation period, Vijay felt terrible as the stress was overwhelming, due to the fact that he had to obtain a much better score for the examinations which he could barely make it. Putting his emotions and anxieties aside, he tried his very best to prepare for the examinations.

On the day of examination, Vijay kept quiet and had not spoken a word. He was worried if he could perform well enough to get into a university. Seeing the state that Vijay was in, Narada apologised to him for not being there for him when he needed him the most. Vijay assured Narada not to worry and that he would perform well. After hearing what Narada said to him, Vijay walked into the examination hall with confidence.

When the result of the candidates who were accepted into a university, Vijay was disappointed with his performance; he did not manage to get into a university. On the other hand, Narada did well and managed to get into a university.

“Vijay! I managed to get into a university! Isn’t that great?” Narada exclaimed with shouts of joy, “Yes! I’ve finally achieved it!”

“Yes it is certainly great. But I did not manage to get into a university…” Before completing his sentence, tears of sadness flowed down Vijay’s cheeks.

Narada placed his arms on Vijay’s shoulders, encouraging him in a gentle tone, “You don’t have to get upset with this, there’s always a second chance. You can do it again!”

“Please! Just leave me alone…” Vijay shook his shoulders and walked away.

Months passed, Vijay distanced himself away from Narada, making their relationship worse. Jealousy and anger built up in Vijay's heart, drove him to make the decision of being a member the Tamil United Liberation Front, requesting the government to withdraw the new university admission criteria, together with the other Tamils’ demands. After 20 over years of waiting for the Sri Lanka government to take actions, nothing had been done. By then, the Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam was formed and Vijay joined them in resort of violence to meet with the Tamils’ demands. His whole family moved to another town in Sri Lanka, away from Narada’s family.

The faithful day arrived, when Vijay was assigned to the town where Narada lives in, where he was supposed to plant a bomb, to give a sudden attack to the Sinhalese. The whole process of plantation of the bomb was successful. It exploded, killing a number of Sinhalese. Days later, by chance, Vijay received a piece of news that Narada's body had been found on the streets…


After all these years of being haunted by these dreadful memories, the devastated Vijay told himself, “For my life, this is my greatest mistake that I have made for letting my emotions taking control over me in exchange for my friend’s life.” Afterwards, he took up his pistol and a loud shot was heard.

Top. || 9:37 PM

Conversations; Draft #3
Date : Sunday, July 19, 2009
Vijay! I’m celebrating my birthday this weekend in my house! Want to join in the fun?”

“Sure! Why not?”

Vijay sure remembered of the fun times that he had with Narada many years ago. They have been very close buddies since their elementary school years. Many years passed, their bond did not change; they grew older and were preparing for their university admission. Staying together with each other’s family brought their bond even closer and stronger. Not until when the government of Sri Lanka, introduced new university admission criteria, where the Tamils in the country have to obtain a better score in their examinations than the Sinhalese to get into the university.


As the date of the university admission examinations drew nearer, Vijay became nervous and hoped that Narada could comfort and give encouragement to him. However, Narada did not give him much concern and continued with his examination preparation. During the whole preparation period, Vijay felt terrible, as the stress was overwhelming due to the fact that he had to obtain a much better score for the examinations which he could barely make it. Putting his emotions and anxieties aside, he tried his very best to prepare for the examinations.

On the day of examination, Vijay kept quiet and has not spoken a word for he was worried if he could perform well enough to get into a university. Seeing the state that Vijay was in, Narada apologized to him for not being there for him when he needed him the most and encouraged Vijay not to worry and think too much and he would perform well. After hearing what Narada said to him, Vijay went into the examination hall with confidence.

When the result of the candidates who were accepted into a university, Vijay was disappointed with his performance; he did not manage to get into a university. On the other hand, Narada did well and managed to get into a university.

Vijay! I managed to get into a university! Isn’t it great?” Narada exclaimed with shouts of joy, "Yes! I finally achieved it!"

“Yes it is certainly great. But I did not manage to get into a university….” Before completing his sentence, tears of sadness flowed down Vijay’s cheeks.


Narada placed his arms on Vijay's shoulders encouraging him in a gentle tone, "You don't have to get upset with this, there's always a second chance. You can do it again!"

"Just leave me alone please..." Vijay shook his shoulders and walked away

Days and months passed, Vijay distanced himself away from Narada, making their relationship worse. Jealousy and anger that built up in Vijay's heart drove him to make the decision of being a member the Tamil United Liberation Front, requesting the government to withdraw the new university admission criteria, together with the other Tamils’ demands. After a long period of 20 over years waiting for the Sri Lanka government to take actions, nothing has been done. By then, the Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam was formed and Vijay joined them in resort of violence to meet with the Tamils’ demands. His whole family moved to another town in Sri Lanka, away from Narada’s family.

The faithful day has arrived, when Vijay was assigned to the town where Narada lived in, where he was supposed to plant a bomb to give a sudden attack to the Sinhalese. The whole process of plantation of the bomb was successful as it exploded, killing a number of Sinhalese. Days later when Narada’s body was identified, from that very moment, Vijay regretted that he had indirectly killed his friend that was once so close to him.

Devastated, Vijay said to himself, “For my life, this is my greatest mistake that I have made, for letting my emotions taking control over me in exchange for my friend’s life.”

After that, Vijay withdrew himself from the activities of the Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam and went over to Tamil Nadu in India, to lead a simple life together with his family.

Top. || 6:16 PM

Introduction; Draft #2
Date : Monday, July 13, 2009
“Vijay! I’m celebrating my birthday this weekend in my house! Want to join in the fun?”
“Sure! Why not?”

Vijay sure remembered of the fun times that he had with Narada many years ago. They have been very close buddies since their elementary school years. Many years passed, their bond did not change; they grew older and were preparing for their university admission. Staying together with each other’s family brought their bond even closer and stronger. Not until when the government of Sri Lanka, introduced new university admission criteria, where the Tamils in the country have to obtain a better score in their examinations than the Sinhalese to get into the university.

As the date of the university admission examinations drew nearer, Vijay became nervous and hoped that Narada could comfort and give encouragement to him. However, Narada did not give him much concern and continued with his examination preparation. During the whole preparation period, Vijay felt terrible, as the stress was overwhelming due to the fact that he had to obtain a much better score for the examinations which he could barely make it. Putting his emotions and anxieties aside, he tried his very best to prepare for the examinations.

On the day of examination, Vijay kept quiet and has not spoken a word for he was worried if he could perform well enough to get into a university. Seeing the state that Vijay was in, Narada apologized to him for not being there for him when he needed him the most and encouraged Vijay not to worry and think too much and he would perform well. After hearing what Narada said to him, Vijay went into the examination hall with confidence.

When the result of the candidates who were accepted into a university, Vijay was disappointed with his performance; he did not manage to get into a university. On the other hand, Narada did well and managed to get into a university.

“Vijay! I managed to get into a university! Isn’t it great?” Narada exclaimed with shouts of joy.

“Yes it is certainly great. But I did not manage to get into a university….” Before completing his sentence, tears of sadness flowed down Vijay’s cheeks.

Days and months passed, the jealousy and the anger that Vijay built up in his heart drove him to make the decision of being a member the Tamil United Liberation Front, requesting the government to withdraw the new university admission criteria, together with the other Tamils’ demands. After a long period of 20 over years waiting for the Sri Lanka government to take actions, nothing has been done. By then, the Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam was formed and Vijay joined them in resort of violence to meet with the Tamils’ demands. His whole family moved to another town in Sri Lanka, away from Narada’s family.

The faithful day has arrived, when Vijay was assigned to the town where Narada lived in, where he was supposed to plant a bomb to give a sudden attack to the Sinhalese. The whole process of plantation of the bomb was successful as it exploded, killing a number of Sinhalese. Days later when Narada’s body was identified, from that very moment, Vijay regretted that he had indirectly killed his friend that was once so close to him.

Devastated, Vijay said to himself, “For my life, this is my greatest mistake that I have made, for letting my emotions taking control over me in exchange for my friend’s life.”

After that, Vijay withdrew himself from the activities of the Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam and went over to Tamil Nadu in India, to lead a simple life together with his family.

Top. || 5:35 PM

Historical Narrative Essay
Date : Sunday, July 12, 2009
“Vijay! I’m celebrating my birthday this weekend in my house! Want to join in the fun?”
“Sure! Why not?”

Narada and Vijay has been very close buddies since their elementary school years, being in the same classes brought their bond even closer. Years passed, they grew older, preparing for their university admission and stayed together with each other’s family; that was how strong and close their bond was. Not until when the government of Sri Lanka, introduced new university admission criteria, where the Tamils in the country have to obtain a better score in their examinations than the Sinhalese to get into the university.

“I strongly feel that it is unfair for the government to have such a policy made. What do u think Narada?” commented Vijay.

“Well, I am not the government I can’t make any changes but I do agree that it’s a blunt decision.” replied Narada.

As the date of the university admission examinations drew nearer, Vijay became nervous and hoped that Narada could comfort and give encouragement to him. However, Narada did not give him much concern and continued with his examination preparation. During the whole preparation period, Vijay felt terrible, as the stress was overwhelming due to the fact that he had to obtain a much better score for the examinations which he could barely make it. Putting his emotions and anxieties aside, he tried his very best to prepare for the examinations.

On the day of examination, Vijay kept quiet and has not spoken a word for he was worried if he could perform well enough to get into a university. Seeing the state that Vijay was in, Narada apologized to him for not being there for him when he needed him the most and encouraged Vijay not to worry and think too much and he would perform well. After hearing what Narada said to him, Vijay went into the examination hall with confidence.

When the result of the candidates who were accepted into a university, Vijay was disappointed with his performance; he did not manage to get into a university. On the other hand, Narada did well and managed to get into a university.

“Vijay! I managed to get into a university! Isn’t it great?” Narada told Vijay with tears of joy filling his eyes.

“Yes it is certainly great. But I did not manage to get into a university….” Before completing his sentence, tears of sadness flowed down Vijay’s cheeks.

Days and months passed, the jealousy and the anger that Vijay built up in his heart drove him to make the decision of being a member the Tamil United Liberation Front, requesting the government to withdraw the new university admission criteria, together with the other Tamils’ demands. After a long period of 20 over years waiting for the Sri Lanka government to take actions, nothing has been done. By then, the Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam was formed and Vijay joined them in resort of violence to meet with the Tamils’ demands. His whole family moved to another town in Sri Lanka, away from Narada’s family.

The faithful day has arrived, when Vijay was assigned to the town where Narada lived in, where he was supposed to plant a bomb to give a sudden attack to the Sinhalese. The whole process of plantation of the bomb was successful as it exploded, killing a number of Sinhalese. Days later when Narada’s body was identified, from that very moment, Vijay regretted that he had indirectly killed his friend that was once so close to him.

Devastated, Vijay said to himself, “For my life, this is my greatest mistake that I have made, for letting my emotions taking control over me in exchange for my friend’s life.”

After that, Vijay withdrew himself from the activities of the Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam and went over to Tamil Nadu in India, to lead a simple life together with his family.

Top. || 8:53 PM

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